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Whispers by ~ktfoo:iconktfoo:



There's a presence right beside me,
And all around me, too.
Rushing, dripping, I feel time,
And all of those it's left behind.
I feel the heartbeat of the past,
Of every love that didn't last.
And as the wind blows through the trees,
I muse, 'When will it be me?
When will my life be a story?
Thought up in some author's head,
That hears the whispers of the dead.
When will it be me?'
The sun rises and I see,
Time is dripping, dripping by.
Forever, death is doomed to sigh,
"They never learn, they never find,
The lessons I have left behind."
©2008 ~ktfoo
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Have you ever been to a place, and it's as if there's some kind of energy all around you? Like an aura, or the memories of those long passed away. That's what this little poem is about.

Inspired by a book titled A Certain Slant of Light. So far, it's been good.

Short, sweet, but I absolutely adore this poem.

<333

(c) ktfoo 2008.

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~gimpfan:icongimpfan: May 8, 2008, 3:54:29 PM
I love it too [=

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~ktfoo:iconktfoo: May 8, 2008, 6:14:13 PM
yay! :glomp:

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That's like pausing to eat a salad in the middle of an action scene! -KehZ
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It takes every colour to create black.... so even in the darkness somewhere there's a rainbow -me
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If yaoi is a sin, won't hell be a mass orgy? -dun remember, sry
~justkeepswimmin:iconjustkeepswimmin: May 9, 2008, 3:10:10 PM
I honestly think that's the best poem I've ever read. There's just something about your writing that captivates me.
~ktfoo:iconktfoo: May 10, 2008, 3:38:27 PM
thank you so much! :glomp::glomp::glomp:

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That's like pausing to eat a salad in the middle of an action scene! -KehZ
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It takes every colour to create black.... so even in the darkness somewhere there's a rainbow -me
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If yaoi is a sin, won't hell be a mass orgy? -dun remember, sry
~ktfoo:iconktfoo: May 13, 2008, 8:12:00 AM
:icongwomp: i love this icon!

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That's like pausing to eat a salad in the middle of an action scene! -KehZ
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It takes every colour to create black.... so even in the darkness somewhere there's a rainbow -me
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If yaoi is a sin, won't hell be a mass orgy? -dun remember, sry
~KehZ:iconKehZ: May 24, 2008, 4:47:50 PM
Fweee! I wonder abuot things like this too...
nicely put! ^^

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~ktfoo:iconktfoo: Jun 4, 2008, 8:43:10 PM
thank you!!! fweeeeee

FMEH!

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That's like pausing to eat a salad in the middle of an action scene! -KehZ
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It takes every colour to create black.... so even in the darkness somewhere there's a rainbow -me
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If yaoi is a sin, won't hell be a mass orgy? -dun remember, sry
~KehZ:iconKehZ: Jun 6, 2008, 10:25:14 PM
fmeh. fmeh. FMEHFMEHFMEFHFMEHFFSJHGGdfosh.
lol.

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"Washingtonians won't mind mutated heart-apples." --Visible Bob, speaking on the fireworks of July '08 xD